Umm... hello. I'm sorry you were so dissapointed. I'm sorry it was missleading. I suppose i should've stated that it is incomplete. Did you even read it? I'll be taking it off now and posting it once it's finished. I was hoping to get feedback from people so i could get see if the story was headed anywhere good. You've told me what i wanted to hear: It's not interesting. Thanks for taking the time to even open it.
