Hey! Could you possibly give me some feedback on my books The Story Book and A World Invisible To The Wise real quick? I'd really like your critiques :)

Heya! :) Chapter 3 & 4 of Sanguine Dawn have been updated!

Thank you for the comment on my book:)
-S.XIII

Thanks for accepting my friend request! (:

Hi Leslie, I write also but not so much lately, too many problems and for a while, no computer of my own. I have plenty of old stuff which you can see from my profile and my books. I also write in sci/fi/fantasy, nnot sure what I coyuld call some of the books gen res, the jury is out on that one. I d also write poetry. A s for reading, used to be all sci/fi but in the last few years I have spread my reading net much wider and now read historical fiction and other works. How're you doin'?
Evelyn

Thank you for accepting my friend request! I love this community!