I'm not usually a poem girl, but dang! They're great, love em'. You have a few spelling mistakes and you might need more commas, to create pauses and help get the meaning across. But otherwise good job!
Edit it a little hear and there and you would have a very good entry. Way to go. I have a daughter only 1 year younger than you well maybe almost 2 years she will 14 this April the 4th. She likes to write poems and draw anime art.