At a Glance

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At a Glance

A smile can be worth years of happiness


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Coffee shop, love, Ethan, Jayden
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yezall

I know adults who can't form sentences as well as you do! Cute story, believable, easy to read. All around nice job! The only other thing I can say is spend some time with the next one, make it longer,

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felixthecat

sweet story! I was a bit amazed that someone your age has done so well. Good, tight little plot...well-edited in the main. You're going to do just fine in the wide-open future of writing ahead of you.

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stevie.grace

I liked it. :) What a cute ending. There were a few typos, but the heart of the pieces was really well-thought out.

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gooduklady

A good effort for a young writer. You have made an excellent start and I look forward to watching you grow as a writer.

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