Nice emotional texture and a certain nice flow. I loved it except for the very last line.
That line put a...too-sudden stop to the flow.
You were sad, the numbness came, you fought it...and then in the swirl...
....Plop...that last line. Your style is going with that flow and giving the flow a good fight and a second or third
look... Your flow is too good to stop it with the last line.