Angel Child

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Angel Child

Angel Child is a story of a couple who faces the trials of life with a little help from a special child


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I loved itttt

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writingmum

A heartwarming tale. Very well told.

A couple of things....

You had a blip on page 14 for some reason.
'Me either' should be 'me neither'.
'Relief flooded them' - ?
'Struggled to not fear' - ?

I wasn't keen on the asterisks between the two POV's. I always think that a swap of POV like that should be dealt with in one's writing and then include a couple of line spaces.

I'm not saying its wrong to do what you've done there, but i... Show more

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renee321

I voted for your book.

This is a very touching and beautiful story about how God takes care of his children. Very well written. :)

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sereni

What a beautiful story about Gods love and your growth in him. We have times of struggle and learning about all he has for us.Serena

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