A Kidless Christmas

A story about a lonley life By:
A Kidless Christmas

When a divorced dad loses his family he has to spend his christmas alone, with only his sister in law, Jackie. But when he finds a secret room in the attic his whole life turs upside down.


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indie23

Although it had many errors, I liked the story, even though it's very sad. It takes on a different twist to Christmas stories. I really think you should come up with a different title though. Something with a more interesting catch to it for others to want to read.

Good Job!

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aprills

hey I really ejoyed your book I just read it for like the 5 time and I was wondering can you look at my book it's called North to South i'd really appriciate it and could you write a comment about it saying what needs to change and be added thanks keep up the great writting.

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aprills

hey I really ejoyed your book I just read it for like the 5 time and I was wondering can you look at my book it's called North to South i'd really appriciate it and could you write a comment about it saying what needs to change and be added thanks keep up the great writting.

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aprills

"Wow' you are very creative and i like the choice of wording and the topic you wrote about!

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smartcookie

Hey I just started a new book called earth days it's like an anime hope you can check it out

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