Reality Heist

Brandee Taylor knew computers. She knew how to hack. She knew how to not get caught. She knew her boring, monotonous life would never change.


But things happen, and in a heartbeat Brandee discovers a universe she could never have dreamed of.


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stevie.grace

As you asked, I read the first chapter. I think your friend was much more concerned than they needed to be. More action? Lord, I think you have just enough action there. Think of it as psychological action, not physical. Your protagonist is in emotional turmoil, experiencing events that she was created to prevent and trapped in a place where she cannot. It feels very real and very quickly plunges the reader into the story. I... Show more

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kazenii

On the 1st Chapter:

I say...1) Where are the dialogues? 2) Long paragraph so maybe you should break them up somehow.

I'll read more.

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RebeckDawn

Your books are so unique and I love getting sucked into these strange worlds!

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keetscrent

The dreams become the realities...I like the tension in the gradual realization. The twin towers, those poles with the platforms... I'm loving this, what a trip. Please write more.

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