Reality Heist

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Reality Heist
Brandee Taylor knew computers. She knew how to hack. She knew how to not get caught. She knew her boring, monotonous life would never change.


But things happen, and in a heartbeat Brandee discovers a universe she could never have dreamed of.

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Heather Fledderus (geordiriker)

If you wish for me to let you know when the next update of the book is, please post a comment, otherwise you will most likely be missed. :)

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Heather Fledderus (geordiriker)

I just added a chapter- not a big one, but I am going to try harder now as part of my new year's resolution to finish at least two books that I started a while ago

Reine DesGlace

Could u please notify me too, I really love your books!

Heather Fledderus (geordiriker)

sure :) I will work hard on it this summer, I just have three more exams to go and then the summer is mine to use for writing :D

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Jiles

Love your style, Please finish this book! Its got a great plot! I hope you like this story line, because I would love to read the trilogy!

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Pujj2112

Hi,thanks for making your story 'Reality Heist' available.I do hope that you get around to finishing off the storyline(thats assuming it hasn't got the most abrubt ending ever!),please let me know if you do.

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Heather Fledderus (geordiriker)

i just gotta get through these last couple weeks of exams and then I'm going to finish it in December. Thankyou very much :)

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stevie.grace

As you asked, I read the first chapter. I think your friend was much more concerned than they needed to be. More action? Lord, I think you have just enough action there. Think of it as psychological action, not physical. Your protagonist is in emotional turmoil, experiencing events that she was created to prevent and trapped in a place where she cannot. It feels very real and very quickly plunges the reader into the story. I... Show more

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kazenii

On the 1st Chapter:

I say...1) Where are the dialogues? 2) Long paragraph so maybe you should break them up somehow.

I'll read more.

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