Toy Story

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Toy Story

A true account of one single grandmother's VERY embarassing moment, compliments of her grandson.


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deshiagrl94

god that was so funny but very up lifting at the same time. your so right what is life if you don't have some up's and down's, plus age is nothing but a number

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paulashene

This is the second story this week I read that I had tears running down my cheeks and a pain in my side from laughing so long and hard. And to think both had children and the 'public involved'. Children are a great inspiration and an ongoing source of merriment..

I love your neighbors already - hope to see more of your stories...Paula

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willwrite4food

Thanks for the kind comments...I'm glad you enjoyed it!

It's entered in the Family Stories contest if you'd care to vote for it. Pls. check out my other books: Reporting for Doodie and Online Dating for Mature Dummies.

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librarian

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

The Librarian

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joeparente

You have my vote after reading your story again

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willwrite4food

I knew I could count on you! Could you please ask your other friends to read it as well? I'd really appreciate it!

You're the best!

Judy

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petra michelle

I would have turned all colors of the rainbow if that happened to me, J.L.! I can just picture it! :))

Enjoyed the inserted quotes where relevant to enhance the mood! (no pun intended)! ;)

I agree with Joe about the size of the font and the grammatical; easily rectifiable.

Good luck, J.L.! Petra :))

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joeparente

Hilarious story. It took guts to write this one. There are some problems with spelling and spacing, especially at the start. a little proof reading and editing will solve that. Funny story!!,.joeparente OH, I forgot. Try to make the print larger. It would make an easier read.

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willwrite4food

Thanks for the comments. It's really strange, the Word document I uploaded is perfect...those problems occurred when I uploaded the file. I'll have to look into that.

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