Review - With the opening line, this little story had my attention. Love your details which create such vivid mind pictures. You give just enough idiosyncrasies of of the characters to give a portrait, yet move the story along, keeping the reader in suspense. Love the twist ending! Wondered at the mention of the missed opportunity of America's Got Talent. Over all, an excellent little read. Fantastic job. Robynn
There at the end I was thinking of "Maxwell's Silver Hammer", lol. What a nice surprise, though!!!!!
You write clearly, with great depth of character (even in a short) flowing across the pages, Janice. Still, without a great plot, the story fails. This piece has a WONDERFUL plot! I loved it. Cheers!!!!!!