An Ode to my Darling Wife

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An Ode to my Darling Wife
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Deleted User

Excellent job and very strong pull of emotions your book has and continue to write more poems because your choice of words and speech encourage others.

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melrose

it was good... i only wish it was longer.. sad,but not to muchh....

melrose

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lazarus67

Thanks Melrose

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laurenashley2148

Very sad, very touching, with a slightly positive yet mellow undertone. It really brought a lot of emotion to me as I was reading it, especially the part "to lose.. to lose, what was once mine....once was ours."

The entire poem is FULL of feeling and emotion, very heartfelt, but once I read that line it just made my heart ache with sympathy and sorrow.

Great poem. I look forward to going through and reading more of your work. :)

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lazarus67

Glad that you enjoyed it. I liked yours too...very much.
Laz

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mysterywriter

That is beautiful and sad. I found it very touching. Does you wife even know how you feel? Maybe you should tell her. I hope your former relationship will be restored once again.

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