Blood flow
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ldcrichton

I noticed a couple errors, but nothing big. The description on your first paragraph is excellent. :-)

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psprakash

That was a real short story. I suggest you could have made it a little longer. There are some typos and grammar mistakes. PM me in case you want me to point them out for you.

Keep writing and you'll get better.

Prakash.

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