It's so amazing to get notes like these.
Can I beg you to look in on another little story (if you haven't already)?
Comments & hearts are always welcome.
Shocking ending too. Wasn't expecting that. I must say, I am amazed at the quality in the pages of this book. Great descriptions, great story. Amazing job on this Barry. Extremely well written. Makes me want to read a sequel... Are you writing another? If not, do you have any other short books of yours that you would reccommend?
God speed in your recovery.
I love this. This gives a subtle modern day twist on the most dedicated man in all history. You gave a detailed account and threw in a great character building analysis of Joseph. The ending was ground breaking which I never expected but you did it well that when read back you could see the ending coming.
Must have been hard for Joseph, but what about Mary? Maybe a Mary perspective story is in the pipeline.......