An Ordinary Joe

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An Ordinary Joe

An ordinary man, in an all-to-common predicament, with an amazing outcome.

How has this "ordinary Joe" such a mystery?

WINNER HOLIDAY STORY CHALLENGE


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pamela60

What a great story. No wonder it won a competition. Well done.

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Redemption

Wow, It Is Amazing. Truely An Incredible Book! Congratulations. Its Like I Never Heard Of The Story Till Now. Great Job!

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tinkdelapink

This had some beautiful moments of despair. You have the ability to make your reader really invested in your characters.

The end was a great surprise but I'm not a romantic so I have a hard time believing that love can concure all. :)

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Demonata-Freak

a very good strt, loved the way u made him sound so confused n really poured out the feelings.i would love 2 read more, so keep me updated

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stormstar1

Shocking ending too. Wasn't expecting that. I must say, I am amazed at the quality in the pages of this book. Great descriptions, great story. Amazing job on this Barry. Extremely well written. Makes me want to read a sequel... Are you writing another? If not, do you have any other short books of yours that you would reccommend?

God Bless.

God speed in your recovery.

~Jazz

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journalist

Beautiful. Well done. ALways a brilliant tale now taken from anothers view. Wonderful.

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jendaz0

What a fantastic piece of writing. The story was full of emotion, which came across very powerful. Love it , love it.

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johnpallister

I love this. This gives a subtle modern day twist on the most dedicated man in all history. You gave a detailed account and threw in a great character building analysis of Joseph. The ending was ground breaking which I never expected but you did it well that when read back you could see the ending coming.

Must have been hard for Joseph, but what about Mary? Maybe a Mary perspective story is in the pipeline.......

Well done

John

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