its okay i wish it was longer
This is the sequel to Calypso, so you might like that one as well. :) There's 5 chapters of that one uploaded.
We need more to these stories please
ill make some
I'm about to start working on Green World, actually. Currently sending Calypso (the first in the series) out to agents now.
by y'all's comments. Thank you so much! I... I don't know what else to say but thank you!
I'm hanging...write some more
I just got to it. It was a very good piece. I did not want to comment until I finished it. You conveyed a lot of emotions and I have to agree with everyone else the descriptions were lovely. I had the imagery in my head. Truly enjoyable.
this book was like television in my head, it was so detailed! good work and good luck!
I love your writing style. Gave you a vote. Keep up the great work. Don't forget to drop by The Healirims if you haven't done so yet. Best wishes. =-)
This was GREAT! I wish there was more!
This is a great prologue to a larger story! Your writing is imaginative and your use of imagery is outstanding...it's like a 3D story presented in a written format...