...I couldn't read it for the same reasons felixthecat has mentioned. I would have like to read it myself. The blurb sounded interesting. What I do before posting my books up, is using the normal and or advanced editing options, that way you can go to mini-preview to see what the fonts would look like and if it readable. :)
Please forgive me...I couldn't read it. The font is WAY too small and light! There was no enlargement feature there, either. I'm rather saddened. Every entry deserves a read and a comment. Is it too late for you to go back and choose 12 point font in edit? I don't think it would affect your story being in the contest...maybe ask Lineh.
Please announce at the forums if you get the font readable:)