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rmdelta

Smeen,

a touching and quite realistic poem. I'm sure it fits a lot of us, 'cause we've been there. I have difficulty reading poetry most of the time but this was quite strong. However, your last verse confused me.

Instead of "say," did you mean 'same?' Maybe it's just me.

Great work, my friend.

Reggie

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