At the beginning of the winter

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User: tndr78
At the beginning of the winter
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winter
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mirandabm

I think your poetry is spare, precise, beautiful. In one or two places the word used in your translation isn't quite right I think, but the overall impression conjures up wintery light, ice and snow, and cold numbed feelings gently warming the soul. I love it.

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tndr78

Thank you!
It's hard to find the right words with translation but I hope they are understandable!
Thakn you for your comment! :-)

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paulashene

Thank you so much for enlarging the font - this was well worth the wait to read! I enjoyed this immensely and thought your dramatic page pauses [your title or beginning of the poem on the bottom of the previous page] was 'anticipation' provoking...I voted and kept...Paula

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joeparente

What you have written is very well done. Page to page editing should be done to make your book easier to read. Try using the backspace key to eliminate unwanted pages and to tighten up each poem. Half of your page count could be eliminated making it more attractive to read. I will vote for your work for content but not for layout./joeparente./Read "WHITE DOWN" I had lots of problems until i figured out the editing process./joe

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rdgaiser

I really enjoy the poetry found in this book. You have quite a few small writes that seem somewhat similar, yet unique just like the flecks of snow right before release from cloud. Your poetry takes on the configuration of telling a tale almost . Almost every piece in your book relates directly with winter, my favorite season, and I love it. They're almost the heart's relief effort, or so they seem. Great stuff. :)

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johncesar84

I would really like to read your book, but the font is very small. You may want to make the font larger for the visually impaired.

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tndr78

Please, let me know how can I edit it, without removing it from the contest?
Do I have to delete the file and then upload again or?
I am sorry I didn't know how it will look like. It is my first books uploaded here and it is new to me... :-/

Regards!

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BookRix.com

Thank you for participating in our
poetry writing contest "Winter & Poems".

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BookRix - your place to read, write and
network free literature on the Internet.

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tndr78

Thank you for giving me a chance!

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