Oh! Holy Moly that was awesome I automatically sinked into it and I closed my eyes and imagined what was going on.That was AMAZING.I LOVE THIS BOOK! :DDD TOTALLY AWESOMEEE DIFFERENT FROM ANYBOOK I EVER READ! AND VERY NICE COVER!:DD
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This was awesome!
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got there in the end :) x
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Wow. Great writing and story that really drew me in. The end was a blast.

Thanks for the read. Enjoyed the whole of it :)
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Hi Brian,

Love your front cover!

Good grammar and punctuation.

A great story, thrilling and engaging. Well done.

Bek :)
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is done by saying which book you like the most.

Brian I thought this book was in the other contest, thus the confusion...Paula
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I think this is one for Ayelet . . . .
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I was drawn into your characters agony form the very beginning. Great suspence and an unexpected climax. Good work!
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I just went back into the book to vote but there is no voting option HELP!!!!! I want to vote for it
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Voting time starts tomorrow
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- especially from someone who posts really interesting writing.

Now all I have to do is convince everyone to go back again and vote for me.


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You did'nt miss the voting, this competition continues until 27 Oct and voting is between 28 Oct ane 4 Nov. I'm sure Ayelet will explain it all in due course. It seems unlikely that anyone will revisit something they read a week ago just to vote for it.
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story - keeping the reader engaged and panting for the solution...sorry I did not see this before the voting time was up...Paula
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Not sure if I post my comments in the right place :)

I love this one, really evocative and you don't see the ending until you are up close....and then you wonder if this time he won't wake up

like it,
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You're a sweetie. Don't forget I'm looking forward to your comments on the Blue Shutters. Did your brother get his copy yet? I'm quite pleased with the finished article, especially the illustrations. I really hope you enjoy it.
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As usual, another mini masterpiece from my pal, Brian. True life horror is so much more affecting than make-believe, even though yours IS fiction. And that is YOUR art - allowing us to believe that perhaps, just maybe, this was true.

Well done.....oh, and I am almost finished with the wonderful book you sent me. Val
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