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Created on: June 14th 2010
Last update: June 27th 2010
BXID: mangal_1276142531.5698280334
Clicks: 273
Pages: 28
Language: English
Category: Fiction
Madhab Kumar Bandyopadhyay
Bear- hug
A short story




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Summer-night experiences of a group of seven college students.


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14 users wrote a comment on this book. 
thadius147 commented at October 7th 2010
Bear Hug-From Thadius 147
Sir, I read this with interest. I feel the story does not flow or lend itself to pace. Abit more characterisation would be helpful and some editing useful. I have also written a short story perhaps I could send it to You for Your Comments. Thanks! Thadius 147.
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thadius147 commented at October 7th 2010
Bear Hug
While a good story, there are a few points I feel need attention. Page 15 Concession in fare, perhaps, reduction in cost, would add to flow.Page 19
Perhaps, Outlined instead of chalked. Page 24. Pehaps, The moon had risen.Page 26 Perhaps , Use, to date, not, till date.
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thadius147 commented at October 7th 2010
Bear Hug
While a good story, there are a few points I feel need attention. Page 15 Concession in fare, perhaps, reduction in cost, would add to flow.Page 19
Perhaps, Outlined instead of chalked. Page 24. Pehaps, The moon had risen.Page 26 Perhaps , Use, to date, not, till date.
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mangal commented at July 13th 2010
Thank you, Kathyrabonnash.
Thanks a lot. Ialso want to thank all my readers and the critics for taking time in pointing out the merits and demerits of the work.
mangal
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nirmi1967 commented at July 7th 2010
hi mangal
I am a new comer to this site.I am surprised by the theme and standard of your writing. Definitely different from the crowd, and enjoyable
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etelizabeth commented at July 6th 2010
A good read!
Thanks for sharing your talent, I love to step into another imaginative world! Elizabeth
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sonti82 commented at July 5th 2010
Bear hug.
Behind the simple story telling, there runs some deeper observations.Thought provoking, I feel.
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On June 29th 2010
puiya24 commented at June 29th 2010
Bear hug
It reminds me some of our wild college days.Nice reading.
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spkundu commented at June 28th 2010
Hi mangal
Bear-hug of lovers is much stronger than the embrace of other blind forces!!!
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