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Tricia Murphy
TRAINS AND BOATS AND PLANES



Blurb:
To travel hopefully is a better thing than to arrive ...


Created by:
footsteps
Date: November 18th 2009
Language: English
Pages: 24
Clicks: 30

BXID: footsteps_1258559313.1762320995



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john111 has saved "TRAINS AND BOATS AND PLANES" to his/her favorites
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On March 2nd 2010
footsteps
Trains and Boats and Planes
Thank you so much for your feedback. If only all stories worked as well as this one! I enjoyed writing it because it felt "right". So many stories feel forced when you try and put them down on paper. But the answer is obviously - practise; practise; practise !! Many thanks.
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paigecarter
Trains Boats and Planes.
Glad I read this. It was 'different' somehow. Loved your writing style ... understated but really well crafted work. Interesting story
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footsteps
Trains and Boats and Planes
Thank you so much for your review. This was one of those stories that almost wrote itself. It's a good feeling when that happens - which is not very often. Many thanks.
On February 2nd 2010 | Answer
kashers
Great idea, superbly written
Well done. The thing I appreciated most about this, other than it being a perfect execution of a cool idea, was the fact you didn't overdo it. The temptation, I find, with most people writing such a story is to do so. Here, the story unravels in a simple, real way. And, because it is, the reader feels the cold, the shattered glass, the twisted metal, etc. Totally gripping, both in plot and emotion.
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On November 20th 2009
cleveland
The end and the start of...
To travel hopefully is a better thing than to arrive... ands suddenly I was the at the end. After all the drama and the rest of the narrative thing went quiet. Loved the read , by the way, and the inspiration that something good emerged from the very depths of suffering. Strange how thing work out. I feel lots can relate to your story. Well done
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