thank you
Thank you for reading and thank you for the critique.
My language is Spanish and the story was not edited.
Hug
Anna
On February 8th 2010 | Answer

Very lovely
I enjoyed your story very much indeed. It had a poignancy to it that touched me. I am not certain if English is your first language but I feel you could improve on a very fine work by having someone edit your grammar. Your tenses sometimes were mixed up...but apart from those small issues, the book itself was lovely. Valerie
On February 4th 2010 | Answer

sweet and sad in equal parts. thank you!
On January 15th 2010 | Answer

To Muhammad
Thank you for your kind words
Anna Maria
On July 23rd 2009 | Answer

Puppy Love
Very forceful in its strong, stark realism. It leaves one with a sigh that goes deeper than pity. One of the best stories on this site.
On July 20th 2009 | Answer

Liebe im Herbst
Wunderbar einfach geschrieben, ich hab es gelesen, verstanden, schreibe aber zu wenig Englisch, muss es in Deutsch tun: eine alltägliche Geschichte,die gerade in ihrer Schlichtheit anrührt und wohl von jedem Menschen nachvollzogen werden kann.Anna Maria, to da rabah shell Tilken
On March 14th 2009 | Answer