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ATZI: The Last Rain Child



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The year is 2490, mankind's last hope resides on Atzi, a nineteen year old girl who has the power to end the world wide drought. She is the last of her people, an ancient race gone extinct to the human world. Nine years of torture has hardened her heart. The desert known as Earth is dying, and only Atzi has the power to summon the rain. Only one question remains. Will she be willing to break down the barriers of her cold heart to save the world?


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cavlaster
Date: October 1st 2009
Language: English
Pages: 24
Clicks: 150

BXID: cavlaster_1254371816.5868000984



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cavlaster
Thanks...
I'm glad you liked it.
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bettyc
Extremely imaginative.
This story is very gripping. The charactarisation is very convincing.
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tanisha
I love this book so much
Thank you for writing such a good book it is my favorite.

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cavlaster
Thanks shashagirl123...
Glad you enjoyed it. Makes me honored and proud. =-)
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sashagirl123
coolbook
hey i just loved the books it's so amazing and so creative hope you keep writing :D
On December 7th 2009 | Answer
cavlaster
Thanks lostinbooks...
It makes me proud to know you enjoyed it. =-)
On December 4th 2009 | Answer
cavlaster
Thanks Keiran...
I didn't ask for a review because I know when it comes to grammar and technical writing they are a few glitches. That's why I have an editor to fix them, which this baby wasn't tossed to her. This was done for the rain contest, but due to low percent of readers it didn't even get close to the top. That's why its ending was written with a rush because we could only write no more than 25 pages. What I tried to do was come up with a complex tale, with good strong characters and plot weaved together and my mused did this one. Zephyr is a prince in line to be King, he has an army to call forth, and the time came when they heed his call. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for dropping by.
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lostinbooks
this book
This book is awsome!!!!!
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lostinbooks
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gomlok
Book Note from Gomlok
Very nicely done, great pacing and good setting. Something about it reminded me of Final Fantasy: Spirits Within, but that could just be the desolate future aspect. I thoroughly enjoyed how you developed your characters, particularly the dynamic between Zephyr and Atzi.
The end wrapped up a little fast but it was conclusive and that's what counts. I was a little confused as to where Zephyr conjured up his army from but that could just be me.

Oh, and in case you were wondering(you probably weren't, but in case you were), I did not post a book review because my reading of this work was unsolicited and I get the feeling I'm already testing patience when it is.

Keep it up,
-Keiran Gomlok
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mirandabm
Your imaginary world is real and frightening. I found it compelling and read it through in one sitting. I think the novel, when it appears, will be quite something. there are one or two small points about your use of words but this is really minor when set against the broad sweep of your writing. Good stuff!
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