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J. Bryant Ray
Confession and Redemption



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Created by:
quicksilver
Date: September 9th 2009
Language: English
Pages: 24
Clicks: 64

BXID: quicksilver_1252524219.9394710064



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rlsmith
Confession and Redemption
It was a nice little read, QS. Kinda makes you smile after screwing up and redeeming yourself by performing a good deed. You think back and say to yourself, "Gee that was a stupid thing I did.".... But then the little smile takes over.
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quicksilver
Thank you for your comments...This contest is restricted to 20 pages. I could have written much more, I probably will expand this one into a Novella.

Tell your friends.

Thank you,

QS
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judy.craig
Sensitive, realistic
Growing up in a small town where all directions include the "stop light" as a reference, I found this story very sensitive and realistic. Depicting the transition from child to young adult. Left me wanting more.
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quicksilver
Thank you very much!
On September 18th 2009 | Answer
skcountry6
My favorite....so far.
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skcountry6
My favorite....so far.
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skcountry6
My favorite....so far.
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gracecountry62
The glasses sure did help bring in that great catch. I was impressed with your story. I bet you could have taken it a little farther.
Only gripes I have is Indent your paragraphs, a lot of potential as a writer just get out of those big boxes I feel like I am lost in a block. space paragraphs by one inch to two inches . it mainly depends on publisher , their brains usually gets hung up in first gear but a little grease relieves the pain i mean brain.

ON WITH THE SHOW

Great writing.
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jetski
confesssion
This is the best of the best!
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