Confession and Redemption
It was a nice little read, QS. Kinda makes you smile after screwing up and redeeming yourself by performing a good deed. You think back and say to yourself, "Gee that was a stupid thing I did.".... But then the little smile takes over.
On October 15th 2009 | Answer

Thank you for your comments...This contest is restricted to 20 pages. I could have written much more, I probably will expand this one into a Novella.

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Thank you,

QS
On September 21st 2009 | Answer

Sensitive, realistic
Growing up in a small town where all directions include the "stop light" as a reference, I found this story very sensitive and realistic. Depicting the transition from child to young adult. Left me wanting more.
On September 21st 2009 | Answer

Thank you very much!
On September 18th 2009 | Answer

My favorite....so far.
On September 18th 2009 | Answer

My favorite....so far.
On September 18th 2009 | Answer

My favorite....so far.
On September 18th 2009 | Answer

The glasses sure did help bring in that great catch. I was impressed with your story. I bet you could have taken it a little farther.
Only gripes I have is Indent your paragraphs, a lot of potential as a writer just get out of those big boxes I feel like I am lost in a block. space paragraphs by one inch to two inches . it mainly depends on publisher , their brains usually gets hung up in first gear but a little grease relieves the pain i mean brain.

ON WITH THE SHOW

Great writing.
On September 17th 2009 | Answer

confesssion
This is the best of the best!
On September 14th 2009 | Answer