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Petra Michelle
Santa's Helper



Blurb:
On Christmas Eve, a man's life is changed forever by an unexpected visitor.


Created by:
cleopeace
Date: December 13th 2009
Language: English
Pages: 24
Clicks: 183

BXID: cleopeace_1260663567.3254940510



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d.pearl69 has saved "Santa's Helper" to his/her favorites
On March 7th 2010
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On March 3rd 2010
cleopeace
Hi Emery!
Thank you for your warm comment and suggestion. I've learned and have yet much to learn about narrative poems, as it was my first! Petra :))
On February 25th 2010 | Answer
elcampbell
Santa's Helper
Nice little story. A suggestion: try to avoid inverting normal word order to make rhymes.

elcampbell
On February 25th 2010 | Answer
cleopeace
Thank you, everyone!
Hi Scott! Am so glad it was entertaining! All that we writers can hope for, no? Thank you! Petra :))

Hi MD! Thank you so very much for embracing Santa's Helper! :))

Hi Cipap! I'll definitely keep the length in mind! Thank you! :))

Thank you for adding Santa's Helper to your favorites, David! :))

Hi Tiger! We can all use a Santa's Helper now and then, eh? Thank you! :))

Hi Voluceris! Am so glad you were able to get a few moments of pleasure! Thank you! :))

Hi Tina! I was so very surprised considering the other wonderful volumes of poetry! Thank you! :))

What a lovely compliment, Brian! Thank you! :))
On February 23rd 2010 | Answer
briandoswell
Sant's Helper
What a great story. I cried, partly at your rhymes but mostly 'cos I loved it.


On February 22nd 2010 | Answer
tina2010
Congratulations! Your book has been included in the top ten of our Winter & Poems Contest. I wish you the best in the final judging. Goodluck!
On February 17th 2010 | Answer
voluceris
So sweet
I liked this because it was so unique and so sweet. Oh, and so much fun to read.
On February 7th 2010 | Answer
tigerpride
My Vote
It was very clever and well written.
On February 6th 2010 | Answer
david33 has saved "Santa's Helper" to his/her favorites
On February 6th 2010
cipap22
really enjoyed reading it, still It was too short :(
On February 6th 2010 | Answer
themightyduck
Very clever. It was great that you told a story through rhyming, it made it have such rhythm. I really liked the Santa's helper. It was really creative. Congrats, I really liked it. You have my vote. :)
On February 6th 2010 | Answer
scottkelly
Very creative and endearing. I liked it =)
On February 5th 2010 | Answer
revueme has saved "Santa's Helper" to his/her favorites
On February 5th 2010
cleopeace
Thank you!
Hi Preethi! You're too kind! Petra :))

Hi Patricia! Thank you so very much! Very kind of you! Petra :))

LOL Beck, it surely would! ;) Petra :))
On February 5th 2010 | Answer
rebekahjennings
What a great little story of a poem. Very uplifting. Wouldn't we all love a Santas helper at our own doorsteps.

Lol...

Bek.
On January 31st 2010 | Answer
patricia.books.works
Your Book
I read your book and voted.
On January 30th 2010 | Answer
preethi
Beautiful!
Your narrative poem is like a ballad for me! Thanks for letting me read and comment. I vote your book. All the best!
On January 30th 2010 | Answer
cleopeace
Thank you!
Hi John! I am so glad you enjoyed! Thanks to members' and my niece's help, was able to upload images which added that something extra. Petra :))

Hi Mr. Jetson! LOL Yep, it's the same. A spin on A Santa in Training. ;) Am so glad you enjoyed it! Petra :))


On January 21st 2010 | Answer
jetson
BRAVA Petra!
I remember reading a shorter version of this on one of your blog posts, but I don't remember it being a rhythm. It amazes me how you did that!

Loved the story, loved the layout and the design of the book, and loved the front cover!

This was both touching and humorous!

Way to go, Petra!
On January 21st 2010 | Answer
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