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On November 19th 2009 | Answer

Thank you
I'm glad the ending was okay for you. Thank you for your comment. I need the comments very much. Thank you again.
On September 18th 2009 | Answer

Comments
Very good story and good symbolism. Kept me interested, at first I couldn't get past all the anger of John and it finally fell together.
On September 18th 2009 | Answer

good ideology
I liked it ,felt an ease and comfort.
On September 17th 2009 | Answer

Your BOW III entry

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On September 11th 2009 | Answer

from RD Larson
Thanks Darla.
On September 8th 2009 | Answer

written confusingly. story content weak. ending guessable.
On September 8th 2009 | Answer

@tarique
Thank you. It is what I hoped to do.
On September 7th 2009 | Answer

Excellent imagery!
I enjoyed this story and I feel that this man of God has been humbled and ready to start again...
On September 7th 2009 | Answer

Red Ruby
Hi RD

Thank you for sending me the link. The story swirled around me in bright yellows, golden oranges, and warm soft greens. I was intrigued with the characters and of course Ruby touched my heart. Darla ~
On September 4th 2009 | Answer

Thank you very much. It's very kind of you to respond and to give a star to Red Ruby. I think that my character John had his heart touched by the dog. I do think people can change and become better more giving and forgiving people. Thank you again.
On September 4th 2009 | Answer