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Sally Xie
Only Child



Blurb:
"What would happen once a louder, shriller, needier baby came along? The very foundations of my stature would be shaken, the household dynamics would shift. No, there was no room for compassion: there could only be one, and I was she."


Created by:
yuletide
Date: January 10th 2010
Language: English
Pages: 12
Clicks: 115

BXID: yuletide_1263086040.5602130890



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calistobraida has saved "Only Child" to his/her favorites
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gskhairah
a good one!
your tale of innocence, jealousy and reconciliation is well-told and holds interest as it moves along. although it is a bit predictable (blood thicker than water?) it succeeds because it tells of complex emotions in a simple yet effective manner.
best of luck.
On February 15th 2010 | Answer
paigecarter
Really well written, and the subject handled with total clarity of the feelings a child would have when he/she is not going to be the centre of attention any more. It could have been longer, but I feel you said a lot in a few words. Liked it very much. A pleasure to read.
On February 10th 2010 | Answer
billytalent99 has saved "Only Child" to his/her favorites
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fairromance has saved "Only Child" to his/her favorites
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wayfarers
Witty
This was clever and heartwarming at the same time. I have a younger sister myself, and I can relate with perfect clarity to your story - and the insecurity that we, as children, harbor when our parents break the news about being pregnant. Excellent use of language, as well. :)
On January 17th 2010 | Answer
rmdelta
Your story
A very strong story, well written and a pleasure to read. Great work.

Reggie
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politicspsd
Loved it! :)
Loved it! :)
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amberisnotacrayon has saved "Only Child" to his/her favorites
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amberisnotacrayon
Great job!
I enjoyed reading this story, the details are great. I felt it ended too quickly, I wanted more :)

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mirandabm
I like this story and the honesty you bring to it. I couldn't help thinking you could write an adaptation of it for young children, as you capture so well the feeling of fear and anger felt by a child threatened with such a change and yet show that in the end it's alright. Good writing!
On January 11th 2010 | Answer
rebekahjennings
Definitely one of the better stories I've read. I really liked the way you apply simile and metaphor. I wanted to keep reading and that's what's important. Great work and good luck.

Can you tell me how you give your book a cover. Everybody has one and I don't know how to do it.
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