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Timothy Dooner
Morning War



Blurb:
Doomed foresight is pitted against free will in this poetic novella about love, fear, passion, and the limits lovers are willing to go for one another.


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timothydooner
Date: December 3rd 2009
Language: English
Pages: 26
Clicks: 168

BXID: timothydooner_1259794634.1049981117



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shani80 has saved "Morning War" to his/her favorites
On February 3rd 2010
lovingempath
hey Dooner...
You have a way with words, that could easily be translated into powerful songs. I believe your talent should put you within the upper ranks of the Poetry contest.


Robin
On January 26th 2010 | Answer
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On January 26th 2010
msabatini78
Extraordinary relationship
From the very first poem, the collection's namesake, you had me. I adored "Morning War". I don't think there is anyone out there who hasn't experienced that longing, and the way you described it made me feel it all over again, even at 11:15 at night.

I was especially captivated by your word choice throughout every poem. You have a true command of the language, and I couldn't help but grin when I saw words like "recherche" and "abeyance". You can learn a lot from an author's word choice, and I felt that as I moved through these selections, I was getting to learn about this extraordinary relationship you had with this woman.

Really great work, Timothy. I truly enjoyed it.
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On January 2nd 2010
sambpoet
Like Snowflakes Descending
How about checking out my book of winter poems and voting on it?

Salvatore Buttaci
On December 22nd 2009 | Answer
sambpoet
Morning War
Great poems! I like the honest way you tell them, which is for me a prerequisite to poetry writing: they must come from the heart. You got my vote!
On December 22nd 2009 | Answer
cavlaster
Great job!!!
I enjoyed this. Keep writing. Gave you a vote. =-) Good luck!!!
On December 19th 2009 | Answer
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On December 17th 2009
mshorror
Morning War
I love your poetry. Nice work.
On December 17th 2009 | Answer
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On December 12th 2009
tariq.summeiyya has saved "Morning War" to his/her favorites
On December 11th 2009
tariq.summeiyya
Well written and a great layout...
I like your poetic style! It is as if you've taken memories and broken them down symbolically and poetically. You've successfully conveyed emotions,memories,ideas,thoughts and several vibrant words as poetry that has to be felt as much as it's read. I can see the work that you've put into this and I appreciate your grammar,spelling and punctuation - making this book an enjoyable and easy read.

Thank you for sharing and God Bless,

Tyrone
On December 11th 2009 | Answer
marionottaway
Interesting
I liked your work but there are a few things that bothered me about it in a literary way. Your endings on most of the poems slumped and lay dangling like a thought train disappearing around a corner. There were a few poems that managed to do a remarkable wrap up to how the tale started. Keep it focused and your will be famous some day. Leonard Cohen did it and so can you. You have the talent to become a Bard - a poet of great merit.
On December 11th 2009 | Answer
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