OKAY so what i mean my "The Black Moon-rewrite" ITS GOING TO BE BESCALLY THE SAME STORY!! The only difference is the writing style will be better, as I have grown over the past 3-ish years, and so have my characters. I'm really hoping this turns out just as well-read as the original, especially because it won't be written by a 12 yr-old this time. Thanks! Please try it out, PLEASE PLEASE give me feedback also.