Hello my Star Wars friend. I think you're going to like bookrix. It's a good site. You should advertize your work in the forums (or groups) so people will read your stories. Bookrixers will give you an honest opinion of your work and will make suggestions, but only if needed. I've started a Star Wars group which you can get to on my profile page. (bottom left) There's other groups posted on my profile page too.
Force be with you my friend. :)