plz share with all friends and tell to share "The power of mind":
Here is the link for the book:
Hey there!! I hope you would be able to check out my books if possible <3 Negative and Positive feedback is most appreciated! My books are still in progress.. So I was hoping if you'll be able to check it out ^.^ It would be awesome if you did XD
So I hope you would be able to check it out <3 Thanks
Dedicated to all of you who spent years waiting for your five minutes! That's all it takes.
I think you have a great story line here, it seems to me either there is grammar error's (which is typical in a draft) or language barrier issues. I'm leaning towards the latter of the two. If you want some suggestions let me know. I think you have potential for a great story though! :)