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Friends Forever

A Fictional Story on Earthquake By:
Friends Forever
A short fictional story of two friends held in the claws of a ravaging earthquake.

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Hi, I am an English associate Professor and I liked your story. I hope you can take constructive criticism. On page 4, in the first full paragraph, the last sentence needs help. You could add the word an as in “an average income group.” Page 9 had a # of small errors, but, I want this msg to be positive & not negative. I think you have lots of potential as a writer. It had spirit, feeling & a surprise twist ending.

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Eugene Samolin

Aditi, thank you kindly for this chilling account of the power of mother nature. I was stirred by the imagery of the two soul-mates, hands en-clenched to one another, their bodies a giant set of angel wings, an angel formed in the love of friendship. It's all too sad, that as humans, it's all too often that it's not until our dying moment that we realise what the truly important things in life are, and how we've denied... Show more

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Loved the book

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Sad ending but really good story

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Deleted User

is it?

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I really cried at final pages. Good story, thank you.

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