I have changed this story. I may not continue this but the story line is the same for the new edition I will put it up soon but have had very little time to work out any kinks.....I'll put a chapter up soon with a summary of what I have so far.
Thanks to all of you I am extremely sorry for not writing more!
Keep posting comments I love the criticism it helps me build a better story.
If you want me to continue this story comment, I have started it in a different way, I think its better but I do still have this ones story line, if you want I can fix it up and add the chapters as often as I can. Anyways comment and by how many comments I get will decide whether or not I continue it.
Thanks to all who added this story to their favorites :) you made my day.