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Juliet & Romeo

What here shall miss, our toil shall strive to mend. By:
User: ana.belle
Juliet & Romeo
Juliet Capulet is a seventeen year old girl whose life consists of controlling parents, manipulative fiancée, jealous friends and wild parties – rich life. She never asked for it, though. She hates it all. Only her older cousin, Tybalt, understood her. And now, he’s dead because of Romeo Montague. Juliet will stop at nothing to get her revenge. But, when she actually meets Romeo in person, will she change her mind?

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ana.belle

I just want to tell people that I will be deleting my account on BookRix. However, you can find me and my stories on Wattpad under the username "anaxbelle" Thank you for your support.

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agarza1999

Wow this is pretty good! I absolutely love the blurb, and your prologue. I would have never thought of something like that. :D This story has a lot of potential. I do have some critiques though-
Firstly, you don't have to put POV. It kind of ruins the look, in my opinion, and makes it look less professional.
Also, instead of writing '"... to get our revenge"- I said. it should be "... to get our revenge," I said.'.
In my... Show more

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ana.belle

Oh thank you so much for the tips!! This is a first story that I have successfully finished, and I don't have a lot of experience with writing besides 2-3 page short stories. Thank you, I might go over the whole story and edit it. Thank you for pointing out my mistakes. I will... Show more

ana.belle

Is this better?

Moving through the hallway, I suddenly felt a pair of strong arms locking around my middle, stopping me cold. Before I could cry out for help, a gloved hand clamped over my mouth. My eyes widened in horror, as I realised that I cant reach my gun. Panic shot... Show more

agarza1999

That's perfect! And your welcome for the tips. For your first story, I'm really impressed. Mine were so muddled and poorly-written. And please, write more stories! You have talent!

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ana.belle

Yes! I finally finished my first short novel "Juliet & Romeo". All 8 chapters are done. Hope you enjoy reading it, and will leave comments. Thanks.

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OmbraLux

Oh my god I absolutely adore this story. I can't wait till you write the last chapter!

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ana.belle

Thank you!

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ana.belle

Hey, I just updated a new chapter - You Belong With Me. This chapter is even longer, and has 2 parts to it. I am almost done with this story - this chapter is 6 out of all 8. I hope you'll like it! <3

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