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Just a Dream
A woman is held captive and realizes it's not what it seems.

fight dream
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The poem is nicely put. Even with the title, I was not quite sure what to expect. Well done :)

However, some of your capitalization was off. I understand that it can be used as a stylistic, personal thing that distinguishes you from other authors/poets, but the way you did it was a tad awkward. Also, make sure you don't switch tenses. It stops the flow of though and makes the reader stumble.

Otherwise, this was well done :)... Show more

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That was a completely evolved poem. Unique subject matter and the feeling of a dream.
nicely well rounded.

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