cant wait for more
Where's the rest? please write more
You left it off at a boring point. When you add more, try to be suspenseful. I got to the end, and thought 'THAT'S IT? THERE WAS NO POINT TO THE STORY!'Sorry if I sounded mean.
It's really good so far, great character development. I wish there was more!
To soon to tell but I think this will be a really good book. Great start!
Please leave a note on my homepage went you have more thanks
love it! can't wait to read more!
Your book is amazing! I hope you have more