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my perfect not so perfect life

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my perfect not so perfect life
About a girl who has an ordinary life. blah blah blah d. I'll get to this part latter. just want to know if it has a good start. Please comment. Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keywords: 
teen, love, friendship, high school
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Hi Ashley, I just finished reading your book. I like the story line you got going,but the only thing for me is, the book moves to fast from one situation to another. I would suggest that you add more details about the characters ( Age, where there from, etc.) Over all i thought it was good. You should keep writing maybe in the first 2 chapters add a little more detail. Good luck Ashley keep going. Oh yeah you have minor... Show more

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Ashley

thanks

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Ashley

Um I just started writing and I just wanted to know if it was okay and any ideas of what the book should be like. please comment. thank you

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