Important Post Deleted User I have chosen this one to read in my video!!! >:DThough, since I'm going to be sorta critiquing I suppose you could say, is it really alright to read an older story? You've probably improved.... Permalink Comment Comments Are Closed 47 Comments | Show Earlier Comments A L I E N Goodnight. Deleted User I think! I'm headed off to bed as well. XD Goodnight, A L I E N. This comment was deleted.