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cinderella- a different ending

User: daisy8400
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like, maybe could have made it a bit longer, then the reader would be lulled into........whatever.

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This actually made me smile. You were so creative and funny with it! You could definitely have a future in humor writing :) There were some spelling and grammar errors, which might put off some potential readers, but if you fix those up, you have a fun story :)

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I agree about spelling and grammar, liked the ending too.

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