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THALIA

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The writing is excellent. Your a writer, and the structure and excellent connection between thoughts pull things along nicely, but I did begin to weary with things after page 90. Also - the incident with the young boy and Thalia (i wont say more of it so not to give away anything). I found it a hard pill to swallow.. it seems any logical person would have done something more if assaulted. Sorry to bitch so, it is a great... Show more

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bergotte

Thanks to you who have read Thalia, which I wrote as a newcomer in a couple of months. It does not have a dramatic end because I hope that is not the end. There is at least another volume in my head: I just have to find the time to write it down.
Bergotte

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lazarus67

Very well written. I can tell you are a seasoned author. Although this story is a wee bit longer than the ones I usually read here at the club, it held my interest. Also I was waiting for a more dramatical finish, but was not too dissapointed at all. It captured my interest from the very start and refused to let it go...so I voted.
Laz

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