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Of all that I've read so far, this one has real potential. For a style like this, you'll need to work more on your "delivery"... just how you choose to deliver your punchlines. They're really pretty good right now, but they *can* be better. I *did* enjoy this. Thanks!
-Stormm
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Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".
The Librarian
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bethandlee
Thank you for the opportunity to have a place to write my family stories. :)
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