It definitely has a lot of potential, it's a compelling story and I can tell that you have a great voice but it definitely needs editing, there are some parts that just don't flow correctly and often the word choice leaves something to be desired. But I think you definitely have something here. Sorry if I sound harsh, I don't mean to be. It's just my own personal view.
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