Search
  • All Search Results
  • Books
  • Users
  • Groups
  • FAQs

ESCAPE

When a monster comes stalking, where do you run? By:
ESCAPE
Jimmy and his little sister will need more than pair of shutters to keep out THIS monster...

Posts and Comments
Important Post
lazarus67

Great story...sorry I missed this earlier. Thanks to Avery, I got the pleasure of reading it now.

1 Comment
crosswaysnet

thank you, friend.

Important Post
Deleted User

Whew! I thought the worst as to who the monster was, but I did not see the identity until the very end. Great job of disguising the culprit.

Important Post
marriah14

Oh My Goddness. That was Awesome! Such a twist at the end! My blood is still racing.

Important Post
J.C. Laird

I loved the dramatic buildup and the shrouding of what exactly was transpiring in the story.

And the ending was a super twist, I can't imagine anyone saw that one coming; that finale wasn't even on my radar.

Nicely done!

Important Post
Deleted User

.. didn't have a clue that it would end like it did. Good ending, good twist to the story.

1 Comment
Backwood writer

you very carefully kept this one as a monster and it was a monster tornado .
good job .

Important Post
lenora.books

Yet another great entry in the contest. I totally expected a different ending. Great job throwing us off!

Important Post
Deleted User

Perfect building of tension to the satisfying conclusion. Good job.

Important Post
L. Avery Brown

I felt the tension building and building. I loved the way you wrapped this story around a horrid 'creature' that wasn't at all what it seemed.

Now when I look at the cover of the book it makes TOTAL sense. (I thought, oh well, another standard 'scary bad guy' story but NO!)

Great job.

Avery

To ensure optimal functioning, our website uses cookies. By using the website you agree to the use of cookies. More info
OK
Top of page
No Thumbnail Remove Please choose a reason Please enter the place in the book. en en_US