What the heck was this? So what, she marries him, gets pissed of like some eight-year-old and then has a baby which is black and she acts totally racist and then she gets killed by werewolf?
Gosh, girl. This is like the worst storyline ever.
I'm not even mentioning your grammar.
Soz, but the ending is just about as abrupt as the ending to Monty Python and the Holy Grail. Actually, the whole book was like that. Sorry, but this went by way too fast, with terrible grammar and events that made my head spin. I bet you are a much better author now, so try rewriting this! I bet you'll do an amazing job!