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The Wedding Present

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The Wedding Present

Clarissa Childress is getting married soon. Her Maid of Honor, Cassie, shared a clown photo on Facebook to scare Clarissa whom is terrified of clowns. Neither of them realized that that Facebook share was deadly. Clarissa may very well not make it to her wedding night.

 

May or may not be a little scary.

 

 

I wrote this short story to scare Clarissa, so it is pointed towards her and her life. She is the main character and everything. 


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Deleted User

Nice! Very good descriptions, and a sense of utter horror established by the narrator. You have a great writer's voice.

Be careful of switching tenses. You went between past and present tense repeatedly. There were a few spelling errors, but nothing major.

Keep up the good work :)

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cassie.parker

Thanks! Much appreciated!
And, yeah, I still need to edit it. Thanks for the help! :D.

Deleted User

No problem :)

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