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Tyson

Unwanted but wanted, does that make sense By:
User: anonimus
Tyson
This is a real story about my pups bad start in life

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robbedbygreed

Wow. This is very nice piece. I really enjoyed reading it :)

However, I would like to give you some personal advice:

First, the introduction is very sweet. However, make sure that the sentences are easy to read, as in the first sentence. You say that your puppy is "...a 5 months year old terror". It took me a while to understand this. Yikes! You want your reader to understand what's written the first time around. Also, the... Show more

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