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The Cookie Thief

User: catkit123
The Cookie Thief
When gourmet cookies crumbs are found in the laundry room, Charlie knows what's up. With her brother Jake in tow, the twins plan to catch the cookie thief by themselves.

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I loved your story and I was smiling as I read it. We had to hide the sweets with my kids but one child could always find them, and catching him was a lot harder.
I liked very much howCharlie came up with a plan, and how Jake was a little skeptical but she won him over. This is so realistic between family members. I know the art of negotiation these children used against their cookie monster.

I really enjoyed your writing... Show more

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What a cute little story. With a few whimsical illustrations, you've got a fun children's book on your hands! Great work!

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It is like twins to get into mischief together. I know, because there are twins who are my cousins.

Thanks for a good read. :)

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I enjoyed this. It was quite well written. My only gripe is....please do not put phrases such as: "He said" or "She replied grinning," as stand-alone sentences. They must follow dialogue with a comma and then, "she replied with a grin."

Apart from those minor distractions, good job.

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Dad, are you mental?
A little "larceny" in this fine story:) Excellent job.

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