>>> Amelia’s joviality and her warmth fascinate him on the spot. He asks her to accompany him on his travels.
So she was on the first sight some sort of spotlight for him.
By the way: " fix(ing) the time structure" - a very meaningful saying.
Good enough for teasing the readers attention. Having the same opulence like the word "decline".
It's highly enjoyable to read your blurb.
Der Dschauli (DD)
I'm a huge whovian, well done! I've added your book to my favorites as I've enjoyed it. When you have time, I'd really like you to read the Reading Sample available of my new book Deep Breath, Release, Embrace and Go. Let me know what you think. If not thanks for reading :)