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Break Me Slowly

A Message from the Fallen By:
Break Me Slowly
A message from the fallen.
A letter to my father.
Just something I wrote in the moment. Don't ever let someone tell you who you are. Walk your own path and stay strong. The night is darkest just before dawn.

Keywords: 
Father, Break, me, slowly, Broke, sorry, fall
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Deleted User

Hi Chris, This poem was very powerful and deep. I love reading poetry such as this. I hope you write more soon. I would love to read them. Great work Chris. Latrice.

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Redemption

Oh why thank you! I very much appreciate the feedback! I am glad you liked it!

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Deleted User

omigosh and you are a boy you are so deep its was beautiful wonderful

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Redemption

Thank you! I appreciate it! But I need to ask what does gender have to do with anything?

Deleted User

nothing nothing at all

Deleted User

and by surprising i meant surprisingly deep that was good like all the emotions from your heart spilled out into this poem and it was surpring to me because i could feel your pain when i indulged into this piece that you wrote. I was beyond satisfactory and very deep .I give you... Show more

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Deleted User

Wow, Chris, somehow your poems touch my heart at times.

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Redemption

Thank you :)

Deleted User

For? I'm just telling the truth!

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