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Sci-Fi Series (Title Suggestions?)

Sci-Fi Series (Title Suggestions?)
This is a random story that I'm accepting constructive criticism for! I need a title please and CONSTRUCTIVE comments! I don't want to hear if the book is shit, I want ways to make it better.

sci-fi, adventure, fantasy, action
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I like where this is going. Sounds like you have a direction in mind for the story. I like the descriptions of the Characters and the background scenery. It makes me feel like I am there.

Looking forward to reading more.

Still needs a Title. I will think about it, may make some suggestions, you can take or leave as you wish.

Keep up the good work :)

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Perhaps you should look at this from the point of view of the servants.

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The Prologue Is a fine outline for the beginning of the story. If you use it as an outline you can expand on all the other elements. Add Characters if you need to. Who are his servants? What are their characteristics? Who is the King? Why would he be in this situation?
Detailed descriptions of the background. Where exactly is the king? Where is his kingdom? What is it like?

As far as a title, "The King's dilemma!" or, "What to... Show more

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That was really nice, thank you for this... but I have to ask, how do you know my name?

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Good of you to create this...prologue, Chris.
Let's start at ground zero, ok?
First. Have you outlined your story? I assume it is Fantasy. But, do you at least mentally have a beginning, middle, and an end? I read your work and thought not. It seems almost like Freewriting.
Secondly. You've written with a high degree of passion...and that's good...but the redundancies don't seem to work well for me. Lines five through seven seem... Show more

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