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In this world he’s woken up to, Jason’s life is not the one he knows. His wife is not his wife. His son was never born. And Jason is not an ordinary college physics professor, but a celebrated genius who has achieved something remarkable. Something impossible. Read the mos thrilling story ever: https://myfreekindle.blogspot.com/2017/09/dark-matter-blake-crouch.html
I haven't read too much yet, but liked what I've read so far. Most SW stories use a Jedi as their main character, but I like that your central character is a Stormtrooper. It gives your story a whole new concept of the saga. Great work. I'd recommend this story to all Star Wars fans. :)